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Tellulah Darling

Tellulah Darling writes YA & New Adult romantic comedy because her first kiss sucked and she's compensating.

Sassy girls. Swoony boys. What could go wrong?

Great premise fails to deliver

Missing in Tokyo - Graham Marks

Very disappointing. It had such a great premise, coupled with a male protagonist and taking place in Tokyo. But it never delivered. By the time Adam gets to Tokyo to search for his missing sister, it just felt like a lite travelogue instead of what could have been a meaty fish out of water story.

 

Then he meets the girl and what little momentum and urgency the story had derailed entirely. The whole tale was very surface until it reached its rushed and somewhat convenient ending.

 

Too bad.